Magician

April 21,2009 Chapter 1

I am the magican. In my role I must make things happen and take things out of the story. It is my job to think out side the box and make what if's. In the the book Swallowing stones it talks about how Micheal shot the hunting gun that his uncle bought him for his birthday. The morning he woke up he heard that a man that got shot the possible day he shot his gun in the open woods. I think that if the uncle would'nt have gave Micheal the gun this would'nt be a book at all there would be no story line. I think that if the uncle would have went shooting with Micheal it would be more interesting because then there would be a bigger story line. What I mean by that is that it would be like a mystery because then every one would want to know which of the two shot the man

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when the book says "Micheal foced himself to look at his mother. I would change this by saying "He was so scared and traifed that he didn't tell his mom. I would change this because it give it more feeling and emoition.

Whn the book says "Her mother was already in bed, reading a book, a large bowl of popcorn by her side....". I would disappear this sentence beccause it has nothing to do with the book.

May 14, 2009 Chapters 8-14 1. What if Micheal would have talked to Amy? JUST REMEMBER THAT DARCY WAS THERE WATCHING AFTER JENNA WAS DONE TALKING TO MICHEALE!! 2.What if Josh is the person who shot Jenna's father? How would the story be different? 3.What if Jenna's mother passed away? How would it change Jenna? 4. What if the police catch micheal when he is climbing out of jenna's house? 5.What if Jenna run away? 6. What if Jenna is serious about killing the person who shot her dad?

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